A Badger And His Burrow

sand and leaves at the base offell from a tree branches breathing withholding reaching taking me down secondssand and leaves at the base of
count them out heart lies still soul wept
dying breath cold dead
ground stones


A Guide to Good Critique - LitA Guide to Good Critique (Literature)A Guide to Good Critique - Lit
Introduction
One important goal for the literature community is to foster a culture of critique. Critique improves writingits as simple as that. But there is always some confusion about what critique is, how it should be done, and how one should respond to it. Since I wasnt able to find a how-to-critique article specific to writing on deviantART, Ive decided to tackle the subject myself.
Much of the advice I offer in this guide comes from experience at online workshops, interacting with some of the best writers and critte
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
Thanks for asking, Anna.
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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bebelink
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~lost-souls ~poetic-forms *france ~francophones
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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...and a bottle full of poison makes life go down...
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i'm wierd....but in a cool kind of way.
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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Suki na mono wa okashi to terebi
Twitch like a bunny on crystal meth
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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But when I see the way that mankind loves... You could search to the furthest reaches of the universe and never find anything more beautiful.
Yvaine, Stardust.
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You write such pretty words
But life's no storybook.
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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You write such pretty words
But life's no storybook.
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No one can't be an artist.
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Nex - kissing you is like tasting heaven.
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurites."
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No one can't be an artist.
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Nex - kissing you is like tasting heaven.
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